^^Naw no beef, I listen to all feedback.

I kinda of knew that the replis was gonna say the flow was off, thats cuz its difficult to intreprent the way I flow on a track into text...I put very hard accents in my rhymes to make words go that wouldn't normaly go, I rhyme syllables more than words,
like

They say get..education though higher learning, can’t be taken away
But how can that matter if the chance isn’t displayed in the phase?/

Taken away
played in the phase/

both those have 4 syllables even though the words don;t match on text

and the dis in displayed I only rhyme the played part not the whole word displayed

PLus alot of lines don;t rhyme traditionaly
like...

“How does this make sense!?”….It is what it is; the reply
But the shit is a fix, thats how MY conscious explains it/

of course the 2 end words don't rhyme, thats cause I rhymed
"how this does this make sense" and "conscious expains it"
if you say it out loud you can see how it rhymes, both have 6 syllables.....

I also rhymed " is what it is" and "shit is a fix" also

I got tired or rhyming like
...............ab
...............ab/
a long time ago...

But like I said I kinda knew that was gonnabe the responce, it's it's hard to intrepent sound without sound...so yhea..I'll return the favor on everybodys shit.......up

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