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Old 12-13-03, 11:21 AM   #21
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ite yu got this 1,
with,

punches,
personals,
wordplay.

good verse but your shit seemed 2 complexed,

1liner good shit man just work on your structure and punches.............

.put an honest vote on this plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98490 .......thx.........pz