Thread: NUCLEAR CONCEPTS: The Rebelion PT. 2- Remix
View Single Post
Old 12-13-03, 12:51 PM   #3
rule
..Soft Focus..
 
rule's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,639
From: Ont.
IP:

this was pretty good, i felt your structure was a little off which made your flow hard to follow but it had some good wordplay and a lot of good ideas, a good read with some good imagery keep it up mayn pz
  Reply With Quote