This was a good verse. Some nice multi's and wordplay, and at the same time, gave a feeling of defiance.

Says a lot here, in so few words. I felt that it COULD be refined, some, in the message that was conveyed, as it DID come across somewhat general, and a lil' blurry at times.
-Just as myself, I prefer a slightly more "clearly defined" picture, when reading another's words, but at the same time, I have the same difficulty in my verses also.

Also, maybe a lil' bit tighter flow -I like when the words fall into place when spoken to a beat, and because of that not quite working out for ME, I marked it somewhat lower than I would have, due to the gripping concept.

Overall, I rate it a 7.5/10

Nice Drop.

Watch for mine.