This is a pretty good piece. Definately worth the time invested in writing it. I thought the first paragraph was excellent in structure, the picture it presented through metaphors, and flow.

I started reading, not quite knowing what to expect, and was definately surprised in finding that the content is so vivid, and alive with imagery.

I enjoyed the majority of the piece, especially the first verse: 'Winter', and the last: 'The Art'.

I felt that 'Fall' could have been more refined in concept, as it didn't quite follow the same type of imagery as the other verses, sort of took me out of the mindset of the rest of the piece. I thought it could have been more "on point", having more to do with the theme previously set than "what I'm doing" in this time of year.

Other than that, I have no more "constructive criticism" for you on this piece.

Overall: 7.4

Keep at it, this was some tight-ass work.

Return tha favor and watch for mine.