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Old 12-13-03, 10:04 PM   #2
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you used the same 3 replies for all 3 of your drops today lol.

But this was alright...structure could use some work though i think, just a little touch up really, try keeping lines around the same length to make it structured better....vocab in this was alright i thought...had some good multies in this though...keep at it.
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