Mmmm... I never liked the Matrix. The first movie was a blatant plot-steal of Dark City... and the fans of the Matrix had enough bad things to saw about the other two movies for me to ever say anything.

I think... this peice was solid up until the word bones. Then it sort of fell apart. But all the former things you wrote, amazing. It actually reminded me of this country song I've heard about this old man who pricks himself with a needle.

But the peice, again everything before the word bones, just sent an eiree shiver down me spine. It made me feel uncomfortable.

What I found amazing was, it made me feel. It's been a while since words could make me feel. Thank you.

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.