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Old 12-14-03, 02:54 AM   #7
ChokeDogg
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Rap about guns if u have one.lol. and if u can use wordplay to make it interestin.the setup was kinda hard for me to read. i thouht the low was a lil off, u had so many stops in between lines, still a decent diss tho, keep spitin u have nice diss potential. that eminem rhymebook had me lol.

PS- critique mines.
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