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Old 12-14-03, 02:59 AM   #2
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But this was ok...your structure could use some work though i think, your lines were kinda stretched out a bit, try to shorten them down and make all your lines around the same length to help the flow out...try to add some multies to help it out...but overall this was alright..keep at it.
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