rhyme scheme was dope, you had nice internals throught and the flow was smooth...bar length was good, not too long n' not too short....

Nice vocab here, refrained from using 3 letter rhyming words, you know, showed especially in the hook (which was tight)...you told a nice message here, it could've been longer but meh..l0l....nice imagry n' shit, good wordplay...

3/5 - would've given it a 4 if it'd been a bit longer, but the quality was dope....why do you not post alot of OM's anyway?