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Old 12-14-03, 09:45 AM   #7
str8-n-sane
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this was aiight some of the shit you said seemed to have no meaning some of it was felt tho and your scheme and flow was nice..... try focusing harder on getting out what you wanna say in a verse dont jus try to keep up a good flow and shit..... but this was overall a good peice and was a very enjoyable read.... keep elevating... pz..
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