Thread: The best pain
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Old 12-14-03, 09:52 AM   #3
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good poem, you had a lot of good emotion the structure is off but your wordplay kept it on point this was good cuz it was real...hope everything gets better...peep my poems ye got time thanks mayn

good poem keep it up
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