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Old 12-14-03, 12:16 PM   #9
Speeches Blunt
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Originally posted by D-Dizzle

Sometime you might wanna go

...AB.......CD
A......C....AB/

Get off other poeple nuts and get your own style.


If ANYONE uses THAT rhyme scheme they out to be shot. Firstly, the D rhyme and B rhyme at the ends of the lines would not even fucking rhyme and the rhyming couplet would not go together at all, making it forced or worse - not even have the same sound to them.

Your example was wack.
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