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Old 12-14-03, 12:53 PM   #10
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Vote: Baby Boi.

PIMPETTE...You had poor structure Ma..and your rhyme scheme laked a lot.. No vocab Or punchles. No anything..stay elevating.

BABYBOI.. You lacked as well. However your structure was ok, and your rhyme scheme was there.. other then that ..that's it.
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