Thanks for the feedback West...I tried to hit your page up and it said 401 error Not Found or somethin...But as far learning how to spit better and flow and all that, try writing a rhyme and spit it to different tempo beats(slow, medium, fast) and see if your words always stay on beat...That's what I do to practice flow and riding a beat...Another thing is you have to know what you want the rap to sound like...Another is to count bars...Lotta people don't do that correctly and that makes your flow go off beat...You just ride the kick and snare or drums or bass...I'm talkin like I'm damn Kool Moe Dee or Special Ed or somebody but that's just what I do...

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