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Originally posted by God
If ANYONE uses THAT rhyme scheme they out to be shot. Firstly, the D rhyme and B rhyme at the ends of the lines would not even fucking rhyme and the rhyming couplet would not go together at all, making it forced or worse - not even have the same sound to them.
Your example was wack.
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See you the prime example of what I'm talking about,
I heard people like Jay-Z, Freeway, Royce the 5'9, Nas use that rhyme scheam all the time
Jay-Z on Renegades......
"Do not step to me - I'm awkward, I box lefty often
My pops left me an orphan, my momma wasn't home/"
"Could not stress to me I wasn't grown; 'specially on nights
I brought somethin home to quiet the stomach rumblings/"
Thats shit is
....AB.....C..ABC
...ABC...............DE/
............DE.....
..DE............../
Like on that last line, "wasn't grown" and "somethin' home" is the only words that rhyme in that, and they not at the end...
It dosnt have to rhyme at the end for a lien to rhyme, it depends on how you flow with it....
I'm not 'bout to sit here and explain shit to your lame ass about rhymes schaems and shit....Got damn yo ass just the type I'm talking about......