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Originally posted by D-Dizzle
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See you the prime example of what I'm talking about,
I heard people like Jay-Z, Freeway, Royce the 5'9, Nas use that rhyme scheam all the time
Jay-Z on Renegades......
"Do not step to me - I'm awkward, I box lefty often
My pops left me an orphan, my momma wasn't home/"
"Could not stress to me I wasn't grown; 'specially on nights
I brought somethin home to quiet the stomach rumblings/"
Thats shit is
....AB.....C..ABC
...ABC...............DE/
............DE.....
..DE............../
Like on that last line, "wasn't grown" and "somethin' home" is the only words that rhyme in that, and they not at the end...
It dosnt have to rhyme at the end for a lien to rhyme, it depends on how you flow with it....
I'm not 'bout to sit here and explain shit to your lame ass about rhymes schaems and shit....Got damn yo ass just the type I'm talking about......
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Shut ... The .. Fuck .. Up
"Do not step to me -
I'm awkward, I box lefty
often
My pops left me
an orphan, my momma wasn't home/"
"Could not stress to me I wasn't grown;
'specially on nights I brought somethin home
to quiet the stomach rumblings/"
the rhyme scheme is:
AB, AB, AB, CD
CD, CD, EF
I have no idea what the fuck you think is happening there, but obviously you dont know how to count a rhyme scheme for shit. Its actually not that complicated, your trying to make it into something it isnt. The reason the end bars dont rhyme there is because its a run on sentence, the lines dont stop to rhyme there, he carries the bar on and forces it into another rhyme.
Dipshit.