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Old 12-14-03, 03:11 PM   #3
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Honestly this battle was weak
I See alot of D/R's

Malcom X....
I wasn't feelin ya verse
Ya need more vocabulary, flow, and multies
Ya punches came sorta weak, Need elevation a lil
And tha IM'n me for a vote thing.... -'s points

Deva
You also need to work on flow, vocab, and multies
Ya punches were ok, Also need a lil elevation
But overall ya verse was a lil edged over Malcoms
But next time, dont use explinations by ya lines
It doesn't help none

Vote-Deva

She simply had a lil more creativity
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