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Old 12-14-03, 03:29 PM   #4
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This was alright....Structure could use some work though....try making your lines around the same length so it helps the flow out...vocab in this was alright, could be up'd though i think....flow in this was ok, it fell off though in this...but overall this was alright...keep at it.
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