It starts off in a fairly blistering fashion. Using expressions of 'real' feelings to bring the reader right into it. Even if one doesn't know what it means exactly. But then i felt halfway through as it began to unravel. As you began to explain more. It became more akward. Well maybe not akward. But something near that. I dunno, i personally would've preffered you to have kept a similar level of mysticism as you did in the first half. Not saying it lost the mysticism altogether. But it lost a fair bit. Also the links between the movie became more clearer. Which i felt could've remained relatively shrouded.

Still a very nice read. Constructed very well. I'm just being a picky lil' fool with my critique...

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