Thread: ~\True-Love/~
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Old 12-14-03, 05:16 PM   #2
blyndedsoul
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short but still sweet.. i think u should keep it goin it'd prob be pretty decent..simple but nice structure..u could improve the vocab tho...keep it goin kid..i like this..lata..
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