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Old 12-14-03, 07:58 PM   #16
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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nice battle peeps.

but kinetic took this one, he had harder htting punches an a lot more quoteables.

gangsta you need to fix your structure, maybe that will make your verse easier to read, an if you have clarity with your punches that makes them hit harder.

kinetic, you just have to elevate dawg, and eventually start battlin vets.


PLZ DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS BATTLE SEEMING HAS I HAVE TAKEN TIME TO VOTE ON YOUR
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98764
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