mm..structure aint an issue in this piece..its good wit out it...like i said to ya..i been there, i kno wat its like but even if i hadnt i would feel the pleasant misery after u posted this..i really like this piece...aint much to say since i already told u how i felt..il be waitin for more..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~