you definatly need to elevate...

structure...
put more content in your lines, and keep the lines even
it will help you flow... dont use all these ////

vocab- read, read, read... extend this, it amazes people,
and compliments your style

wordplay- mix up the verse with wordplay....
this cant be taught, only practice can get you there

punches- punches will win your battles dawg... go to
W.E.C. and read the tutorials...

~AshY~