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12-15-03, 01:26 AM
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mainly... just make sure your lines rhyme...I seen a few and
I was like... wtf... wheres the rhyme... not too bad though...
your structure still needs a lil work... but you had some nice
wordplay in there... just keep elevatin dawg...
~AshY~
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