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Originally posted by A.T.
aight...
structure was fucked dawg... dont double space... and
dont stretch your bars...
make each 2 lines rhyme... like you put it,
it messed up ya flow...
but other than that, you had some pretty good content...
just keep elevatin dawgy...
~AshY~
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Yah.. your bar structure really threw me off a bit here
Try doing your lines like this..
I'm the shit yadda yadda yadda
This is big so it's it yadda yadda
I like cats blah blah blah blah
But I don't wear hats blah blah