i read it an i'll give you a break down of your verse
best lines
Your Sides-A-Pest We'll kill you like Pest-A-Side
Best You Die, Your Plain so just Rest Your Pride

worst lines
You Loose Out, With all your punches grounded
Like Con-Cordes,Your wack and ECCO houndsIt


you could of hit harder, you write like your doin an audio track, try an make you lines longer, and your verse on thewhole shorter!!!

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