this was a good concept. a different look on life. its pieces like this that i like, because they make you think. One thing about this piece thou, is i felt you could have of had a stronger intro to it.
but the rest fit good. you showed us where you stand in thoughts about life, and told us why. you did a good job explaining it all out. structure could use a little work, but it didnt take away much from this piece.

~Tera~
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