Hello Liba!

Ive only ever seen one matrix movie, and it was the second one so i was a little lost in the movie, and didnt understand much. but this piece you can still understand without seeing the movie at all. i think you did a great job saying what you wanted to, and made it interesting. i too felt i liked the first part more, but because it was more mysterious, and i love pieces like that. you had lots of detail and emotion, it was a strong written piece

~Tera~
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