No contest in my eyes
thrust came way to basic in his rhyme sceme (some didn't rhyme or flow and all)
and with the plot he laid out the images throughout the entire piece

dez came poetic and complex and made it extra clear in the last bar just in case, good flow and wordplay
average take on the topic, but you made it work with the content

'craving vengeance against myself..hating what i had become
shadow boxing with my shadow..but it beat me to the punch'
^dopeness

Vote - Dez