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12-15-03, 04:11 PM
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structure was off, and ya bars were stretched...
try keepin the length even to help ya flow, and make
sure every bar rhymes...
good topic, the content was in there, which made it
a good drop...
just keep elevating dawg
~AshY~
A.T.