Check it out...
im still workin on it...this is just 1 verse from a track im workin on
i need feedbak peeps.....let me know what y'all think
eventually, i will record it.....

i am sick of this violence, all this hatin and ridin
i got a feelin inside me thats gon into hidin
i've decided that i aint gonna hide it
y'all fuckers realizin that this rap game is dyin
but your too stupid, to even look through n through it
if ya chewin and shootin then its gonna be ruined
who's even attempting to change it, i shud save it cos
im afraid it might be gone before i have made it
and played it, i want to take part, i play hard
but i noticed they all talk shit until they fall
now there gone another commercial rapper is hired
and it aint gonna be long till the game itself has retired

hope you enjoyed

peace