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Old 12-15-03, 05:51 PM   #6
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the finisha is mad nice bruvva.......
its a gud punch and a personal...nice

other than that, tha punches weren't that great....
it was a good verse and read with a gud style.....
multis were used well and the vocab was tight....
flow was little off but it was a good read

stay up playa...........................................pe ace
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