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Old 12-15-03, 07:10 PM   #8
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Both amazing verses

Mental god, your flow was awesome your vocab and structure was great the way you kept the reader involved to this piece was really well done you had a great story line...no flaws in that at all

Phil Em Up, you also had a great verse your flow was great and your rhyme scheme was good, i liked your descriptions also very well done

Overall I think mental took this, this was close but mental had an impressive verse, that was awesome

Vote Mental God

Good verses both of you though