ok, the first verse, was kinda choppy in some spots, off on part of the rhyming scheme, ok multis, but it got its point across, so 6/10

I dont pay attention to hooks or choruses

the second verse rhymed better than the first, could of had a better flow but it was ok, ok multi's made a lil more sense to me, thought who did what verse, i was confused on what was what but thats on the other side of things, this verse got a 7 1-2/10 i think...
drop some feedback on my attendance verse please thanks

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