Tha's so sweet... I have to admit I didn't think it was going to be as good as it was when I first read it. But then I liked it... you caught my attention with well placed vocabulary in the first line... I think that's really what gets me, the simply placed complex words in a poem and you displayed this tallent well. I liked it because there was still some 'thug' type content in it... with the ride or die but you tossed it up and made it intellegent.... not just expressing on a low level but you spoke to all. You displayed your feelings in a well composed manner, congrats... peace