Veteran
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IP:
Uh...
Real good formats...
Real good flow, decent vocab, great imagery.
But what the hell was this about?
The birth of a serial killer?
A passion killing to someone you once loved?
Not dissing it, I must have just missed the reasoning behind the killing.
Overall, 7.75/10
Woulda given higher, this was really dope...
But it left me going, "huh?"
Peace
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For my convenience, not yours!
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