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id probably say this was ya best ive read, on you doing this/similar topics....seemed to get the emotion in it nicely.....good structure complimented by the multis.....but if im honest..i didnt really like the hook much...other than that nothing i can really bitch about...so nice work....seems like ya getting better at the love stuff..but id stop doing them for a bit, while ya at the top cos you seem to be doing alot of em at the minute....pZ.....
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