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Old 12-16-03, 04:09 PM   #15
Born To Kill
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I'm a give this to Bugz for a more balanced attack.

Wrapped came fucking nice, really nice in that opener...

Then completely fell apart.

It almost looks like the 2 opening lines were written for him, then he took over the rest...

And fucked it all up.

Seriously, the structure is even different.

He's got those two almost perfect lines...

Then everything after it is simple and filled with, ", /, and () bullshit.

Anyway...

Steady, decent punches from Bugz, decent wordplay, decent flow.

Nothing amazing, in fact he needs ta elevate...

But he kept it comin with the shots and flow.

KILL THE COLORING OF FONTS, THOUGH!

Bugz

Holla back...
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