yo was an aigh't piece, flowed well had some decent wordplay and a good rhyme scheme, a really good use of multi's and your vocab was pretty dope. just post your links and keep up bro. peace.

if u got time peep my piece called "Hybrid Theory" and leave some feedback, muchly appreciated thanx in advance.

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