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Old 12-16-03, 04:31 PM   #13
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actually, i thought there were a few good verses, but overall this was only average (average for elite material). some of it wasnt interesting to me to read. i'll actually goi thru it. .

Put the blam to Ur grimey face -- rounds scar..
Ya crew sig like a clown car -- a buncha jokes in a tiny space..

ok line.

I'm open to laughs cuz infact Ur closest to wack..
G-Z won while anti.peed N shit all over U cats..

average again.

Front.. ya hurt in seconds.. cuz yo' guys frail..
Fuck an Urban Legend.. Ur an ol' wives tale..
^ not feelin at all.

If ya think ya jerks hard.. get smacked back..
N left face down like the first card in black jack..
lol, nice line. .

Talk shit to Cal.. I hope nuttin is told by cunts..
End up gettin broke, gutted N smoked like blunts..
liked it even tho its filler.

i give this: 7/10.. 5 being avg elite material.

dilly do the math, 20 from the top and 39 from the back
thats the locations of the forum in which you gots to be at

no. . this line is horrible. ^

i'll direct the votes, bitch i'll sever your face too
im a cocky actor, I wont just 'take 5'......i'll take 6, 7 and 8 too

good line. . ^

def's an outkast, no friends, no family....knew this kid was a loner
when that chip on his shoulder came with fuckin dip and a soda

not feelin it.

adema? now matter how hard you try, you'll never live the street cus..
only reason u deal wit red dots, is cus nobody gives you the green ones



lol. i give this a 6/10

Och

I try to be quite seductive, but Tri fucks up my pimpin....
Cause if 3's always the charm...no wonder I'm lacking bitches...

nah. i get it but, not that great. avg line.

Yet I had his mom screamin last time I dicked her down....
Left the bitch so hoarse....she qualified for the triple crown...

lmao . . the best line here

Would put my sex pistol down...but this poser'll act...
Adema said his colon walls got some posters of Mac...

But I don't swing like that, poking men aint my habit...
But I deal with these faggots....like Eye deal with these faggots...

good verse. . 8/10

User
Tri felt hes nice....he beat kollision...so for that ill belt him twice
cuz the worlds your oyster... & you still lead a sheltered life

not funny to me.

your cool tho....king of the bench....this kids running the pine
plus, ill take you by storm....while youll just flip some of his lines
nice.

really tho...UL is gay…n their not thought of as guile…,
cuz your so out of your depth, that its measured in nautical miles

alright

but i step right....while you dont, cuz you know that i deck dykes,
i said keep it real...& then discredited most of your sex life,

verse = 8/10


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