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I was feeling your imagery for sure dog, ya gaveme a bit of a flashback lol!!! Anyway i was feeling ya peice, you had nice complexity and a few similies that were tight!! ONLY SUGGESTION would be to be more creative in your rhyme scheme, NICE PIECE!!
And why these other peeps just come in here to bitch!! Read the piece and leave feedback, it ain't difficult.
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