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IP:
This is an alright pz I feel you on how fake the world is. Christianity is the only hope I have. So your point is clear well illustrated good use of vocab but this line
{It's often to my lifetime to be left hungry with little or no scraps found
And so I plan to finish my musical dinner plate little or no scraps found}
could have used some more creative rhyme scheme. and the outro was a little weak but I feel where ur comin from pz and luv.
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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life
20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish
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