and the good word is:

Well i couldnt quite grasp the topic either than the idea that people these days are sheep and just follow the masses. Your flow was kinda strained because the syllabul count got higher as the piece went further

In my opinon you had a few forced rhymes, heres the biggest example i could find

It's all lies, some people don't know how to make it beyond Matrix
Or when they do,they tend to die over how fake our world really is

The flow of the 1st line made the sound of the 2nd no where near the correct pronunciation...

Overall, this was not bad...great imagry and descriptions...

If you would be so kind
me and Speek EZ have a collab called Self Inflicted... please give us your 2 cents

id be elated to see beyonce on (one of) my piece(s)