i liked this piece.........lot of witty lines.............the simpleton line made me laugh and shit.........
enjoyment was good, structure was ur usual......legnth was not a bother........it was a good read.........7.....or 8 /10............for the concept ne ways................good job.............hit my open up later when i post........

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