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Old 12-16-03, 08:57 PM   #4
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Yea this wasn't Great...ya structure Need Work Aye Ya Need TO Fix that Up Because I THought this was To Hard to read In Some Points.ya Flow was alright Man....but ya Had Alright Vocab still a bit Simple But Keep Elevaten Man......P.€.a.c.€....
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