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this was Nice I Thought the Structure was Nice Some Of The Best structure i have Seen..ya Flow was Allright not Much to Complain about....Letter form was Good it made the Topic Work.....Ya Vocab was A Littile Too Simple But It was Still Ok......ya Wordplay Made the Image Betta In The Head......all and all A Nice Open Mic......P.€.a.c.€.....
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