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Old 12-16-03, 10:07 PM   #4
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Leave 3 links Or Names Or this will get deleted thanx....

Anyway this was alright.ya structure could use some work...some lines were too short some Lines And Some Were too Long....Ya Flow was Good but it di Lack in some bits....ya Vocab was 2 simple.............All and all Keep Elevaten Man And DOn't Forget those Link or Names.....P.€.a.c.€.....
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