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Old 12-16-03, 10:33 PM   #7
Gene Pool
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alright first thing's first. nyte fire? wtf was that? look if your gonna read this and leave feedback then leave some feedback worth fuckin readin like seriously that go's for u to lewd. don't post these one line two line bullshit. but anyways deva. I thank u for pointing out the fact that structure doesn't really mean shit except for keepin ya lines the same length. somethin I do have trouble with and I know the flow was a lil choppy to but I know this piece would be better felt if it was rapped out. but thanx for all the feedback so far. keep it comin peeps. muchly appreciated. peace.
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