girl i cant leave/ this rap game got me bound by honor/
life was crazy but now im at a calmer/
head up and i stand taller/ i lost my love/ got it back/
but dont know how to call her/
what went wrong and where did i faulter/
give anything even my last dollar/ to have you back/
cause to be with you is like a honor/ its just me/
need you here/ i cant take the weight its crushing/
no one ubderstands but me/ i cant make it better trust me/

....................displaced hate.......

Next time format the structure to ten lines...
Thanks ~Bounce~